In the untold night, burnt and broken
Ashes for words, Hardly outspoken
My solitude erasures, a silent token
Ruptured bursts, fiery crimson desire
A risen spirit, an embodiment of fire
I am the Ashen Phoenix
Ashes for words, Hardly outspoken
My solitude erasures, a silent token
Ruptured bursts, fiery crimson desire
A risen spirit, an embodiment of fire
I am the Ashen Phoenix
Short but powerful. :D
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this one. ^__^
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Very good. I like it.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of 'I am sahsa fierce'.
hey beautiful
ReplyDeleteits deekz from gs
<3 love it
Plus im going to follow u on this!
hope u make more beautiful poems.
Wow this is beautiful. I'm stumbled upon your blog randomly, and I'm glad I did. This poem really touched me.
ReplyDelete- Heather (http://heatherezell.com)
Hi Ash!
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting back. I definitely remember this poem and love it as equally as I did last month. :)
I'm very enthused to hear you enjoyed the first chapter of Falling Into Yesterday! I'm hoping to get it published someday.
Hope you're doing well!
Cheers,
Heather (http://heatherezell.com)
Thank you so much, Ash. Your comment touched my heart. :) Any well wishes are brilliant wishes to me! So it means a lot...
ReplyDeleteAnd of course I don't mind you adding me to your blogroll! Perhaps I'll add you! ;)
Girl that is sooo creative...nice
ReplyDeleteWrote this when I was fourteen -
ReplyDeleteEerie bleerie summer night,
unknown fear - I fight.
Whispering tree and scraping leaf,
passed cat claw beneath.
Foreign beer in my hands,
casual attention it demands.
Cradled it rolls down the throat,
warms me like an old coat.
Morning dreams begin to call,
subconcious fantasys enthralled.
Reality wishes what is right,
Eerie bleerie summer night.
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P.S. No longer on GW?